Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.
I believe that littering at the beach is gross. When you throw ropes at the beach the sea creatures will get tangled and they will die. The plastic bags are nasty because they get stuck over the heads of the turtles and dolphins. They suffocated and die.
I suggest that everyone should take their rubbish home after they use the beach.
By Akesa
Akesa P @ Saint Patrick's School
I am a Year 2 student in Room 1 and my teachers name is Mrs Deeney.
How Volcano Works?
In Room 2 we were interested to learn how volcano works.
We did an awesome experiment. We used baking soda and vinegar to make our volcano erupts. The lava flowed down the sides of the mountain like a stream. We enjoyed it.
By Akesa
What I did In The Holidays
In the holidays my family and I went to the park to play and had fun. I played hide and seek. I played tag with my sister and brother. Then we ate sandwiches and sausages.
We had a great time.
By Akesa
The Weather Today
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.
Today is a hot day. The fiery sun makes me tired, sleepy and sweaty. So I drink lots of water. I play under the tree and I can hear the leaves rustling.
By Akesa
The Weather
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can use describing words.Today is a very hot day. The fiery sun makes me tired and sleepy and sweaty. So I drink lots of water. I play under the tree and I can hear the leaves rustling. I can see the birds gliding across the blue sky.
By Akesa
My Trip To the Beach
Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can use describing words.
My family and I went to the beach.
We ran into the water. I was dancing and splashing in the warm water. The waves crashed on the sand. My mum bought strawberry ice cream and it was yummy.
We had a great day.
By Akesa
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Why Littering at The Beach is Bad?
Learning Goa l: We are learning to write a persuasive text. Success criteria : I know I can do this when I can express my point of view...
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Learning goal : We are learning to write a descriptive text Success criteria : We can do this when we can use describing words. Tod...
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In the holidays my family and I went to the park to play and had fun. I played hide and seek. I played tag with my sister and brother. T...
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In Room 2 we were interested to learn how volcano works. We did an awesome experiment. We used baking soda and vinegar to make our volc...